dharai ramro 6 a hajur aajai badi save garnu na la ok take care always .
Raj kumar
rabin_shayami@yahoo.com
A aamai ke ko haiku hana tapai pani japan tira yaso janu bhathyo ki kaso ? tannai po lekhna thallnu bhayo haiku,, malai ta tapai ko haiku padhera ta hai hai lagyo....... la la aamai feri feri panilekhana nabhulnu hola...
limbunYn
niranjan9ko@hotmail.com
Well, your kawita is feelingfull BUT not hi-ku,sorry, i've to say forcely.
Laxmi Rai
rai_laxmi@hotmail.com
Dear Shashi Didi,
ANAM-Namaskar!
Well, This is not appropriate to write here but would like to introduce to you as no option other than to write here that, This is Laxmi Bahini. I know it's hard to remember now to you, cause it's been nearly 2 decade that we have not been in touch.
Ma kya didi, "ANAM" ma sangai kam gareko. I mean, I used to follow you didiharu, you, Sharada Shakya, Shova didiharu.
Last but not least, Nice "Hi-koo" simply nice and cotemporary. It's great pleasure to seeing you here as "poet" too. Wish you all the best and hope to see your more creation.
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very good haaiku........!!!!!!!!!!!
dharai ramro 6 a hajur aajai badi save garnu na la ok take care always .
A aamai ke ko haiku hana tapai pani japan tira yaso janu bhathyo ki kaso ? tannai po lekhna thallnu bhayo haiku,, malai ta tapai ko haiku padhera ta hai hai lagyo....... la la aamai feri feri panilekhana nabhulnu hola...
Well, your kawita is feelingfull BUT not hi-ku,sorry, i've to say forcely.
Dear Shashi Didi,
ANAM-Namaskar!
Well, This is not appropriate to write here but would like to introduce to you as no option other than to write here that, This is Laxmi Bahini. I know it's hard to remember now to you, cause it's been nearly 2 decade that we have not been in touch.
Ma kya didi, "ANAM" ma sangai kam gareko. I mean, I used to follow you didiharu, you, Sharada Shakya, Shova didiharu.
Last but not least, Nice "Hi-koo" simply nice and cotemporary. It's great pleasure to seeing you here as "poet" too. Wish you all the best and hope to see your more creation.
WBR,
Laxmi Rai
Hi Shashikala jee,
"Good haaikus!" Keep it up.
wow..............Very nice creation. Shashilkala jee, plz keep it up. Thanx